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this is a story of broken pieces
letting go feature by feature;
shattered pieces, ice rain,
and something blacker than sadness
turning from snowfall to knives
and the scarlet ground that follows.

this is about knowing when to stop
but never knowing the time.

because fingers snap louder in the cold,
they shiver and shake, shiver and shake
until the tremours turn to bone
and you feel it when they break.
a century's warning isn't enough to prepare for an earthquake;
a thousand years is still a blink when the last sinews
split.

there is nothing welcome about the open air
and how it bites your exposed skin,
its teeth sharpen and gnash,
dull enamel that scrapes,
and the bleeding won't tell you
how it stops.

just because you have spent a hundred sundays
pouring over the globe's crosswords
doesn't mean you'll find that eight letter word,
finally,
for a warning sign of dissipation.

you will never see the end nearing,
you will never know when to stop,
you will,
i swear you will,
feel the way the world ends,
just as those fingers break,
not with a bang,
but with a whimper.
and when we began to dissipate,
i saw eight letters in the lines of my skin-
my body, from yours,
it read
"distance."
i wonder if i'd ever read this at a poetry lounge. not sure it has enough feeling
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BMWYSP Mar 5, 2013  Professional Writer
i suck at crosswords....
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
it takes mad practice haha i sucked so badly at first, but i'm pretty good now!
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BMWYSP Mar 6, 2013  Professional Writer
That's good. That's how it was for me and Sudoku. One day, it just finally clicked. I understood it, however, it's still hard. xD
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
haha i get you :] i've never had the capacity to teach myself sudoku so i just stick (obsessively) with crosswords!
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BMWYSP Mar 8, 2013  Professional Writer
I used to clip sudoku out of newspapers. o.o I haven't lately though.
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:iconchloroformboy:
most newspapers dont have crosswords on sunday
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
the boston globe has a magazine including one
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TinzTheCan Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
this..is so brilliant and amazing and wonderful. I'm jealous of your writing skills. It's just..wow yeah. Wonderful.
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weight13ss Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is just brilliant :heart:
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