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i know she uses toothpaste
to whiten her teeth
but that's not the reason
her smile is so bright

she's got everything painted blue
with either morrissey
or beyonce
playing in the background
but not loud enough for you to hear the words
unless she sings them herself,
& it's much prettier that way.

i like the feeling i get
when i pull her hips
against mine
& when our chests mesh,
the way our breathing picks up
like a band when the singer
begins a new song.

we aren't anything apart
but when the lights dim
and our glasses fill,
i swear you can hear a hum
and the pluck of a guitar
searching for its harmony.
i'm happily with my boyfriend but until recently i was also allowed to see this girl and this is for her
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Rose-is-night Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. It is absolutely amazing! :D
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
thank you!!
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Iceblueeyedgirl Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!!
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
thanks!
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is ethereally beautiful
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
oh, thank you kindly <3
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TDI2789 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014   General Artist
it got better and better with every word! great job
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
aww thanks!!
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poetries Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
This is beautiful, Melissa. So delicate and heartfelt. :heart:
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful! I love the second stanza!
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