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you sleep through so much sun
that it is the moon
who rises for you.

starchild,
born in the russian springtime
with cyrillic letters on your tongue,
you are endless.
you are a ring,
curved to infinity
around me.

your hands belong in mine,
or else on my hips.
curve me into the shape
of an s,
narrow me in the centre
to give room to your arms-
they belong around me.

dearest dear,
lovest love,
you are a gift;
when i fall asleep
on the opposite edge of the bed from you
and wake curled to your chest,
it is christmas every time.
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Iceblueeyedgirl Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful as Usual!!! Great Work Dear!!! <3 
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013   General Artist
beautiful diction and line breaks, beautiful soul :clap:
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
thank you!
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013   General Artist
but of course, dear beautiful being :heart:
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do-they-collide Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love you and i love this
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
i love you too ^_^
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do-they-collide Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<333
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brokenglass16 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Writer
This is so beautiful.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
thank you :]
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musicgypsy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist
I will never stop giving fucks when it comes to your poems. Okay heh, that sounds odd...but every time I see that little purple and blue strip in my watchlist, this thing jumps inside me and I feel like I have something to look forward to. You words always make an impression on me. In fact, I'd say you're one of the few dA writers who has actually influenced my writing. So don't get down on your skills. This one's truly a beautiful poem...not your very best, but still gorgeous and tender.

you are endless.
you are a ring,
curved to infinity
around me.


Love it. :heart:
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