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cuckoo clock by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



i am afraid of a linear world with
no curved ribcages and flat lines over hearts-
we are time, we are time, there is no time,
and the bird in the clock is screaming and screaming:


you are nothing!
you are nothing!



i don't like the penny eyes to match the
dollar skin,
i don't like the music to drown my empty ears
of all colour and feeling,
it's burning a hole through my face.

diligently bound into conformed, contorted books,
now with easy-to-read-print!
we are advertisements with feet, selling tragedies
with every pore we have.  
stories of 'you'll love me, won't you?'
to keep us afloat in the world we
imagine to be filled with
water and great whites and squids;

we drown with two feet on sand,
we breathe until we die,
we breathe or else we die,

my tongue is burnt with the yellow bird, screaming and screaming:


you are nothing!
you are nothing!
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

i'm not crazy, i think, i swear, i think, i shouldn't think.

inspiration/causeofmindfuck: [link]

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:iconcibbwin:
"We are advertisements with feet, selling tragedies with every pore we have."

I wish I had written that line. I really like the sense of rage and bewilderment I get from this.

--
It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconforcopeland:
My gosh YOU.ARE.BRILLIANT.

Just thought you should know that. You really deserve it.

--
short and stocky, dammit!
:iconwokeupfromdreaming:
unbelievably true and unbelievably brilliant. Your writing, to me, is therapeutic. Thanks.

--
When you're dreaming with a broken heart,
The waking up is the hardest part...
:iconiitdtpp:
you must meet my duck! his name is Freud Fillmore the duck of dreams! lol but he might steal the 'star' from your name...so watch out!

--
we're just imposters,
posing as stars as we fall
from the sky,

*ohsostarryeyed

trying to work out why music gets melodies but hearts only get beats
*rachel-rhapsody
:iconblue-pixies:
:heart:

--
i found you
... but lost myself along the way

*project-improve
:iconohsostarryeyed:
:heart:

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconblue-pixies:
:D
tis always wonderful talking to you

:golmp:

--
i found you
... but lost myself along the way

*project-improve
:iconfierypoplartree:
stories of 'you'll love me, won't you?'
to keep us afloat in the world we
imagine to be filled with
water and great whites and squids;


:heart:

this is amazing.
as suggested in a previous comment, i just might have to print this out and stick it on my wall too.

--
And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
:iconpaulwaggers:
You're an amazing writer, I wish I had half the talent you did.

--
Woof, I am a cat.
:icondeadhead-chemistry:
'we breathe until we die,
we breathe or else we die,' :heart:

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