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i cannot say what i need to say,

there are many, many things we cannot talk about:

the military, its ploys,

its gunmetal toys;

the way a gap in the teeth

draws a crinkle like cellophane

to a face once filled

with green eyes and irish love;

the r's thrown deep into

the charles,

the dirty water in which

boys with lesser sense

might find themselves;

the greenery and celtic landscape;

and you,

entirely you,

you in full-

i cannot talk about you

because i miss you so much my heartache has a heartache

like acid reflux burning my body

and it is just so unbearably sad

to know

that none of this can be fixed

because in less than a week you will leave me for years

and i will be left to grow roots

in some unwanted, rubbish-filled lot in the city

that i am now afraid to enter.
i'm sorry this isn't how i'm trying to feel
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:iconmasvida:
masvida Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I absolutely love you. Your work is this wonderful melding of thoughts that just stop my breath every time. Thank you,
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
thank YOU!
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wongy06 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Oh, how I've missed this in my absence. :)
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
:] <3
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jennedy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013   Writer
my favorite of yours in a long time. the images just seem to spill angrily everywhere. :) great job.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
thank you very much!
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"the way a gap in the teeth
draws a crinkle like cellophane
to a face once filled
with green eyes and irish love;"

ugh stop being so talented.
beautiful image so simply portrayed
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
oh, it rotted me a bit to write that. thank you for enjoying it, though :]
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:iconfelka-wolf:
Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome m'dear (:
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