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danny meadowmouse by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



if the stars leave you behind,
if the alphabet falls like rome,
if i forget to forget your birthday again,
if we ache in silence,
if i murmur lies to cradle my head,

say you will hurt.

-

when i tell you i dream of angel bones,
when you told me about your heart,
when i stumble over my words and feet,
when you are deteriorating,

give me a hand to hold.

-

i may become a briar patch,
i may shift into a butterfly,
i may burn to a daydream transparent;

remind me to breathe.
-

i spark your skin in spiders,
or wake up and fleetingly believe you are there;

tell me you're listening.

-

if i am no longer enough,



say you won't care, please say you won't

care.
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

five, four, three, two, one - nothing.

title = best book known to mankind. i got the briar patch from it. I JUST GOT ANOTHER DANNY MEADOWMOUSE IDEA. MWAHAH. sorry.

this isn't about =GwenavhyeurAnastasia, but it is her birthday and once there was a song she had in her journal and i got the last bit of this from it, soooo it's for her.
LO SIENTO, NO ES BUENO/A.

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:iconamat3il:
I really like this...

--
Listen close as the rain falls down to the ground

It's true, we are
we are destined to fail
:iconscribalwriter:
Aww, so achingly sad and bittersweet. The lines are wonderful and fit together so beautifully. 'i spark your skin in spiders' Just.... yeah, so perfect. ^_^

*sigh* I think I needed to read this today. Thank you for posting. :hug:
:iconblue-pixies:
you had me at the first stanza.
:heart:

--
i found you
... but lost myself along the way

*project-improve
:iconlittlewhite-shadows:
How bittersweetly wonderful.
:iconmy-dearest-spoon:
(i read those books about danny meadow mouse and all those guys :))

and besides.. it's a BEAUTIFUL poem!!!

--
I'm an artist.../ and if you ask me---art is just a clever and (un)safe way of revealing truth (to listeners).
:iconsuko-chan:
when i tell you i dream of angel bones,
when you told me about your heart,
when i stumble over my words and feet,
when you are deteriorating,

give me a hand to hold.


I have an unhealty obsession with everything Angel-like. Angel bones are love, and that stanza swept my heart away. :heart:

remind me to breathe.
Because we all need someone to do that for us.

I lovelovelove you because you are amazing and wonderful and Ican'ttellyouenoughtimes Because you always make up more that makes you even more wonderful. :hug:

--
Characteristically, she's perfectly interesting, stunning and beautiful -- Personally, I think you should hate her guts.

=writingclub
:iconp0laroids:
i think i'm in love with your writing.
lyksrsly. :heart:

i spark your skin in spiders,
or wake up and fleetingly believe you are there;

tell me you're listening.


--
Flickr
:iconlosingmyfaith:
good piece, i really liked it (:

--
" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconfreaky-foot:
i think i'm a little bit in love with your writing.
(but i wouldn't know, seeing as i've never been in love before.
but this, this has potential.)

:heart:
:iconyouinventedme:
when i tell you i dream of angel bones,
when you told me about your heart,
when i stumble over my words and feet,
when you are deteriorating,

give me a hand to hold.


:clap:

--
one half of ~ZombiesAteUs

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