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deforestation: a serious issue by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



couch shaped like a uvula
with gag-reflex intact.
black-bricked green mocks
cheetah print upholstery like
gap-tooth lips and swallow
you whole, pulling you into
a world of mouse crumbs
and lost change.
-
you always grew angry at
the passive-aggression i'd
sling around you like a lasso,
but you had the spine [and
fists and raw knuckles] to
make something of it.
-
there are too many trees falling
in the forest with no one to hear
them, with no one to catch them
in their whole lonely-but-not-alone
herd.
-
tonsil hockey is pointless because
no one ever wins, do they?
-
cheetahs aren't drawn in clumped
plush fabric. they aren't green with
black spots or black with green spots
or flesh-toned with blue-black spots,
but i am no cheetah. cheetahs don't
wear dog-vomit stains or mouse-bone
necklaces or coins between their lips.

in fact, i am willing to state that if
you are ever so close as to see the
inside of a cheetah's mouth, you
will soon be eaten and will then
take a tour of its digestive tract.
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

you're stuck with a litttlee more of my strange prose ish poetry ish business.

if she likes, little miss sibel may have this piece. let me rephrase: ~blue-pixies, this is for you. unless you don't like it, then i can write you something better [the passive-aggressive thing, yes?] :aww:

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:icontheafterwhys:
That last paragraph is particularly decisive. It makes me smile, for some reason I see humor....

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconbeigegray:
Your work is always captivating,
this is no different.

:heart:

--
And I asked myself about the present: how wide it was, how deep it was, how much was mine to keep.
--Vonnegut
:iconshep4life:
nice work! I like the tonsil hockey line...heh

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
Holy damn, this is amazing.

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...if you know what I mean.

TyZulaaaaaaaa. :heart::noes:

My icon was made my the incredibly awesome ~numbah3 ILU. :blowkiss:

Well slap me with a fish and call me grandma!
:iconyouinventedme:
that opening stanza really draws you in.

very strong piece.

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconblue-pixies:
i like i really like it ^^
altough a little gramma error... 'couch shaped like a uvula'
-- it should be 'an'
thank you for this :heart:
:glomp:

--
i found you
... but lost myself along the way

*project-improve
:iconi-love-snape-3:
LOVE stanza 2, 3 and 4 especially :heart:
:iconchrysanthe-al:
great open and close. this seems different.
cool work.
:iconhelzcullen:
there are too many trees falling
in the forest with no one to hear
them, with no one to catch them
in their whole lonely-but-not-alone
herd.


my favourite part (: are you sticking with poetry then, over prose?

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listlessheartssignhere.

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