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i have entered a tunnel,
archways and curled walls
of the clash of unwanted bodies,
fingers in my throat
aching to summon blood,
and palpitations.

i hear nothing.

trapped in the fence of my head,
i am thinking in scattered seeds to plot
in further regions, safer than
they can be now.

i am thinking loudly
about amorphous concepts and rhetoric,
the wavy distortions of my body,
the undulations of my skin,
the black vignette of my vision.
i am gulliver in lilliput,
enormous comparative to my surroundings;
the world is tailored to fit my body,
but nothing else.

i am dissociated,
i am a sliver of the moon
untethered-

at best, i am a petal in the breeze;
at worst, i am nothing at all.
first serious dissociative episode today
that was fun -.-
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Iceblueeyedgirl Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully Deep and Stunning!!!! <3
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lasagnabomb Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
awwww
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do-they-collide Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is incredibly stunning.
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veiled-eyes Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Photographer
i know that feeling oh-too-well... i hope you're doing okay <3 it's not nice. the last part hit me right in the feels "at worst, i am nothing at all."

sometimes writing is the only way to find your own reality. if you ever lose it, words are there.

x
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
thank you so much :hug:
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is terrifying and heart-wrenching and fascinating all at once. Kudos to your descriptive ability.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
thank you!
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013   General Artist
uggh. everything about this poem tugged on my heartstrings! this is damn gorgeous, sugar :heart:
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meganbreukelman Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Photographer
the last two lines grabbed my arms and dug their nails in
i love it
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
thank you so much :heart:
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