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everything i see is .collab by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



we'll stand like picket
fences in eerie, mirrored
neighbourhoods, strong
and pale, covered in paint
and poison. [the posts
dig homes for themselves
between skin and sinew,
displacing blood and spitting
splinters.]

they'll plant themselves
in our path,
colour themselves red,
with the cracked-heart blood-yolk
from their old love,
and say STOP!
[but this is our road,
this is our life,
these are our hearts,
and this is my promise.]

but paint will always fade
and shoes will never stay white.
nothing and everything will invariably
change, and pin-cushioned stomachs
will bleed discomfort onto raw cement.
[a stitch in the side, a plank in the
belly, but a trail will be left behind
to remember where we've been and to
focus on where we're going.]

to the right, to the right
up a little, see the star?
we're gonna make it that far,
baby this is just the start.
i mean this is the best part,
where we find out who we are,
where we lend a helping hand,
a pair of lungs, and a heart.
let's make photographic memories
where everything's a blur,
i mean every scene we see
is in polaroid picture colours.
write our feelings and emotions on the back
of our minds
["you and i - oddly, he was hers, thank God
she was mine"]

my eyes are wide, stars falling between lashes,
and i see the picket fence posts directing us there.
sweet history is what we'll be, our quarter's up, life flashes
loving you 'til my heart turns to dust and i become air.
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

full title: everything i see is in polaroid colours

collab with the wonderful ~GetYourGrip
his: [link]

i dare you to guess who came up with the lovely title, and had an equally grand backup!

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:iconmourningnightingale:
This is beautiful. Sentences and the metaphors...absolutely great.

--
sometimes they fall for a reason,sometimes they fall for no reason at all
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
So wonderful. It's slightly morbid, yet very pretty.

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...if you know what I mean.

TyZulaaaaaaaa. :heart::noes:

My icon was made my the incredibly awesome ~numbah3 ILU. :blowkiss:

Well slap me with a fish and call me grandma!
:iconohsostarryeyed:
aww, thank you!

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
Welcome!

--
...if you know what I mean.

TyZulaaaaaaaa. :heart::noes:

My icon was made my the incredibly awesome ~numbah3 ILU. :blowkiss:

Well slap me with a fish and call me grandma!
:iconohsostarryeyed:
thank you from us both!

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconwombat-pentagram:
this is nice.

--
"to dream perchance to wake anew"...
:icongetyourgrip:
you flatter me.

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconx-silentscreams-x:
I love the rhythm and imagery you both used. Beautiful work. :)

--
We speak in riddles
Expecting the world
To listen between the lines
:iconshep4life:
the fourth stanza has a great energy to it...great title!

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconfreddieismyqueen:
Another piece that is gorgeous in its tragedy. I love that it's painted with melancholic imagery and has a very dark vibe yet as a whole is a most beautiful piece of writing. You both did fabulous jobs!

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