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you begin to talk
because talking means that
someone else can't
&you start to realise
(as most girls do)
that you have a boyfriend

&soon
he's not just a boyfriend;
he's your boyfriend
&he's not just better than
anyone else in the world
he's better than
anything else in the world

&you would trade years off your life
to spend a little longer with him
or to see him smile when he's sad
or to feel his face in your hair
the way he does when he hugs you
&you can't feel it
because right now he's too far away

but distance is only the space between
point a and point b
between you&between me
&if you give it just a little more time
you'll realise nothing has changed
and the disjointed rhythms
your heart beats out like a drum
sticks like a song in your head
the moment you watch recognition
hit his eyes
when you walk in.
and i don't write so often. update soon guys, i'm sorry.

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this was my night. i think too much. i hate emotions. i hate when creepy large gingers promise you alcohol and then just stay around and annoy the ever living shit out of you. i miss my boyfriend a lot. i know he knows i love him, but i wish i could make him see just how much.
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tiajones Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is incredibly beautiful.
well done.
<3
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
thank you so much, pumpkin!
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
of course, sweetie. [:
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Befera Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
ahhhh goegeous. :D "disjointed rhythms" <- unf
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
thank you <3333
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Befera Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
hi i'm bef and i can't spell

*gorgeous
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sasukekiller Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
same situation , great piece , has a very nice sort off build up , over all , nice work.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
thank you very much <3
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
right where i am..
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
i'm sorry, love :[
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