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is it with heart
you wish to start
a tangle of you and me,
not just of skin
or place within
to just feel less lonely;

and how on earth
could i be worth
that space you wish to fill
for a body, tight
no vacancies at night
i fear it stays empty still.
category....


rhyme....


JUDGE ME, BITCHES.








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:icontstre2727:
Love stories so romantic
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:iconreveur-artiste:
reveur-artiste Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this really, very much! Lovely! :heart:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
aw, thanks! <333
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:iconlittle-supernova:
little-supernova May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
/judged (but under the premise that you're trying new things, and you've done rhythm and your own style justice) :heart:
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Kelsendiperous May 16, 2012  Student Writer
Hoo boy, this is exactly what I'm going through. Everything you do is personal but still holds something familiarity to it. Thanks, darlin', for the words!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
thank you for enjoying it! :heart:
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:iconitalianinnazitrainin:
You fear the place it still empty or will be? Other than that it is really cool!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
kind of both, really. thank you!
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diddlyhohum May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
JUDGED!!!!!!!!

lolol jk i like rhyme when it is done tastefully and well. WHICH YOU DID
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