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hold my waist              like an urn,
no      questions   asked.

careful.                       moonlight.
            wings folded      like oil          under the covers.
legs.                  flesh.

still me, love.
i don't want to move.
move me, love.
i want you still.

break bones
for                
              sand  -    art.
swallow me,
spit me
out.



use      my   blood                      as paint.
r o l l                     my
tongue
over
canvas.

hold my   thighs like
          birds,
watch me tremble.

hair the color of
                                                   f r e c k l e s
                             in my eyes.

slouching twin scoliosis.


spina bifida.


bernoullian spiral shell
curling round my spine.


avogadro's
                               number.
call              me
       (home).



love (,) a lost bird.
featured!
[link]

kinda visual, i think


something different. x
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:iconformaniac:
formaniac Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Student Writer
"avogadro's
number.
call me
(home).
"

this part is darling. i mean that in the most flattering, inspired, gawking way.
beautiful piece as always :heart: ~~
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
ahhh, thank you <3333
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:iconformaniac:
formaniac Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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:iconiceblueeyedgirl:
Iceblueeyedgirl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very lovely darling and the format is captivating!!!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
thank you!!
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sunshinegypsy Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Professional Writer
This is amazing:

still me, love.
i don't want to move.
move me, love.
i want you still.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
thank you very much :heart:
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:iconamweitz:
AMWeitz Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Writer
I fell in love with this at the first line. WHAT a simile. "hold my waist like an urn". UGG. :heart:

This also brings up a question! I've been trying to create space in my poems, like this one, and I've done it before in several of my older poems, but suddenly dA isn't letting my do it. How did you create the spacings in this poem? (Perhaps it's just my computer...?)


P.S. It's good to be back. I've missed your poems like crazy!!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
thank you!!
also, i don't know -- this is fairly old, so i don't know if things changed or what!
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:iconamweitz:
AMWeitz Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Writer
:heart:
Ahhh, okay. Thank you :)
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