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i am whole-minded
and half-hearted;
incomplete sketches
and jagged star scribbles.

i am chipped enamel
and faded lacquer;
cold cherry juice and
clouded water.

i am half-full
and heart-shaped balloons.
i am skinned peaches
and camera shutters.

i am waterlogged cotton
and steaming skin.
i am block letters
and imperfect lines.

i am cold fingers
and trembling spines;
writhing intestines
and paint-filled canvas.

i am alphabetically-organised
and in numerical order.
i am stumbling shoes and
bird bones.

i am snapped pencils
and angel-kissed;
wind-blown and
half-clothed.

i am colourless and
metallic,
devoid of blood
yet inhumanly human,
stitched with scars and
flaws and fallacy.
©2009 *ohsostarryeyed
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

well, you get to see my journals and you get to see my fictional writings that i blather on about things i might not understand.
so i thought you should know who i actually am. [but i am mean and decided you had to work for it :heart:]

my creative title also tells you about who i am. ;)

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:iconmaniasdoor:
~maniasdoor Feb 28, 2009, 7:24:29 PM
This is perfect.
<3
:iconchrysanthe-al:
~chrysanthe-aL Feb 28, 2009, 7:26:33 PM
how on EARTH do you manage to write so much? it amazes me. and this amazes me too. i think my favorite bits are the 'jagged star scribbles', 'camera shutters', 'snapped pencils', and the last stanza.

'cold cherry juice' makes me feel thirsty. even though i hate cherry juice. XP
:iconeaglewarrio9:
~eaglewarrio9 Feb 28, 2009, 7:31:07 PM
this is good.
although, i tried to read into all of this meilissa,
and i got stumped at 'half-clothed.'

also, i have twenty six poems of yours that i need to attend to. :3 i just need to take some time to go through all of my deviations.
:iconnozomi-san:
~nozomi-san Feb 28, 2009, 7:35:40 PM
beautiful, amazing, every good adjective known to man (and woman) :heart:

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:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Feb 28, 2009, 7:36:29 PM
i write everything and anything that comes to mind :\ i'm not exaggerating, either.

thank you very much! :heart:

haha, i've never drank it, per se. i've had it on a maraschino cherry, or from a natural one when it was very ripe, though.

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Feb 28, 2009, 7:36:39 PM
ahh, thank you so much! :heart:

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconchrysanthe-al:
~chrysanthe-aL Feb 28, 2009, 7:38:21 PM
:D

actually, neither have i.

-goes to wikipedia (yes, it's a verb) maraschino cherry-

ew. i can't stand cherry-flavored anything, but the fruit tastes pretty good.
:iconthat-hippie-kid:
~That-Hippie-Kid Feb 28, 2009, 7:43:16 PM
just amazing.
:heart:

--
wishes bounce me weightless.
the infa-red scope of pointlessness.
:iconbetweenthepages:
*betweenthepages Feb 28, 2009, 7:45:18 PM
beautiful, i wish you'd have written this 5 hours ago before =MermyLeDisko's contest closed...
:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Feb 28, 2009, 7:50:29 PM
thank you!
[figurative sense, my friend. i personally interpret it as two things: half-there, and half-hidden.]

:\ i apologize. i write too much. and now i am overloading you.

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
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