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i killed the cat last week and by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


and well- i
think you should love me
anyway.
©2009 *ohsostarryeyed
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

FULL TITLE: "i killed the cat last week and buried him in your grandfather's terracotta pot..."

love the title now, because ~ejectionletter is wonderful.

response: [link]
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haikuhaikuhaiku!

i hate the setup of this- the syntax, maybe.

and. i wanted to continue with this, use it as an ending or something, but there is no way i could do that.

it's best on its own. sounds like something that could be said about me ;)

Comments


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:iconlittopampam:
~littopampam Jun 30, 2009, 12:31:56 PM
:D your wonderful ^_^
And dispite what I may say...
and do
I want to keep my friends

--
"Don't spend your whole life trying
to get back what was taken away"
-The Offspring

Please stop throwing around the word "love" When you tell me, I won't believe you I only say love to a small number of people Don't tell me this unless you truely mean it
:iconosiristhrasher06:
=Osiristhrasher06 Jun 30, 2009, 12:32:28 PM
somebody once told me that you like people for their [near] perfections, but you love somebody for their flaws.

I believe this haiku embodies that.

--
If you like it, suggest it for a Daily Deviation! :D
dA is for the literary arts, too.
:iconejectionletter:
~ejectionletter Jun 30, 2009, 12:38:04 PM
title: I killed the cat last week and buried him in your grandfather's terracotta pot...
:iconmaireemargaret:
~MaireeMargaret Jun 30, 2009, 12:39:30 PM
I really, really like this haiku a lot, a lot.

--
what goes around is all around.
tpb
:iconsecondarysunshine:
~SecondarySunshine Jun 30, 2009, 12:40:35 PM
This seems very honest. I can think of numerous people I would like to say this to. =)

--
<3
L

"It's not how you LOOK, it's how you SEE"
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 30, 2009, 12:40:53 PM
Something so simple and yes to incredibly beautiful. This is going to speak to a lot of people on a lot of different levels. Brilliant.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Jun 30, 2009, 12:41:43 PM
A MILLION TIMES YES!

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Jun 30, 2009, 1:04:29 PM
thankyou thankyou, a lot, a lot.

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
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