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if you can hear me, by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



day one.
six-ten alarm. look like i fell into blender. brush teeth for forty-five minutes. spit, rinse, floss, cry. walk two stairs, fall down twelve. do not move.

day two.
no alarm. still at bottom of the stairs. hungry, ignore. thirsty, ignore. broken wrist or broken motivation. do not care. still look like i fell in blender. sleep for fifteen hours with sore neck.

day three.
set alarm too late. seven-thirty. panic. do not move. decide it's not worth it anymore. forget to sleep.

day four.
wake up alive. stand up, fall down, stand up again. light candle. blow it out. light new match. put it near hair. grow scared. extinguish match. go back to sleep.

day five.
nine-thirty. too sunny. angry. light match. put by face. coward. move it toward glass of water. miss. hit skin. smell acrid smells. feel scalded scar feels. wish to kill self, wish to kill nerves. lay down in sun. get skin cancer. feel cells grow.

day six.
legs hang off bed. seventy feet too tall. roll over, on floor. toes sticking out window. cancer added seven hundred and eighty inches to height. wash burns on arms in waterfall, wince. bandaids too small. lay down. cause earthquake.

day seven.
we might be giants.
©2009-2010 *ohsostarryeyed
:iconohsostarryeyed:

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full title: if you can hear me, you should be on medication.

i don't know where to put this.

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:iconguitarlover333:
beautiful <3

i love how you write :]

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"You're a punk, just a big ole punk, with a bit of Rockabilly thrown in."~Rose Tyler

Icon by the awesome ~CursedArchangels

10th Doctor:"How long are you going to stay with me?"
Rose Tyler: "Forever."
:iconohsostarryeyed:
:heart:

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:icondreaming-in-green:
Was this inspired from your initial thoughts as you woke up? I often have the most bizarre yet poignant and honest thoughts during that waking period.

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Oh no! How did I get out of cyberland? We have to call the PATRW (Protection Against the Real World) Agency to make sure I've been sterilized!
~rosecoloredhalo
:iconsockless-sheep:
I do this thing with your work where I just have the urge to read and re-read it. It's compelling and kind of addictive :O_o:

But good addictive, I think.

:+favlove:

brush teeth for forty-five minutes.
[...] wake up alive.
[...] legs hang off bed. seventy feet too tall.


Wow.


~ Sheep xx

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:sheepish:
I'm out of bed and dressed. What more do you want?
:iconimkikyo:
when you read this, do you picture everything happening in timelapse photography?
I do. it looks amazing. I want to make a timelapse movie of this now, but I'm a worthless photographer.

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Waheblahhableh! Waheblahhableh!! You always say that!! Misuta Barumu-- iie, Barumunku-san.

You... are an acrobat.
... and he told me a story I will never forget.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
SO LATE, I'M SORRY!
i don't, but i would love to think in timelapse photography. i bet you're not a bad photographer!

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconscribalwriter:
Oh wow. I had to scroll down to start writing before I even finished reading! But, :heart:, that transition from day one to day two... oh wow o wow! And there's such a subtle element of humour to it too (or maybe that's just me ;) ), but it's a real joy to read. I especially love the slow and soft transition of humour and the absurd into something darker and slightly painful, something sad. I love this. Enjoyed reading this so much - read it twice and I'm going back again! :heart:
:iconcrashcoursewomb:
win.
:heart:

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when i end, you begin.
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
First stanza=my daily routine.

This is really neat, btw. :iconiluplz:

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like butter on a bald monkey. :eyes:

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