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you are honey-tongued,
thick and sweet words
dripping down my fingers
as i put them
to my lips.

winter rolls in,
high hills and iced walls
but i inch ever-closer
to your darted waist
and sink in-
you are my favourite sweater.

i am more in love with you
than there are freckles on my face
at the peak of summer;
i am more in love with you
every minute
we spend
together.
or me, anyway
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meldickinson Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer
the imagery in this poem is wonderful. it kept me attention the entire time and pulled me in. i really enjoyed it. i love the first and the last stanzas.
you have a way with words, miss :meow:
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this is so cute :rose:
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Rose-is-night Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was lovely. I've thought i've had that a few times, but it has yet to last. :(
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LittleMissInocence88 Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's so sweet!! I sometimes wish I had that. Sometimes I feel really pathetic when I tell myself I don't need that but I know I really want it. :(
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
it's not pathetic, it's a nearly universal human desire
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shep4life Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful
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shep4life Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Always
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