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when a palpable change
breathes discordance in my chest,
it is because
i am missing you.

you are an essential element
found in the body of the universe,
lock and key
struck in me.

i want the love i feel
to shine from me
into you,
the cosmos and stardust
collecting in the corners of your eyes
while you sleep.

and when i trail my fingers
like routes along a mountain peak
over your neck,
the thrumming is the sound
of solar flares.

i want there to be no question
that when my heartbeat stutters,
it is imitating my words
when i tell you that you are
my sun and stars.
i think i get them from love

or anxiety or alcohol i forget which

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:iconmjthinkpink:
mjthinkpink Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your words enchant me c:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
:heart:
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i want the love i feel
to shine from me
into you,
the cosmos and stardust
collecting in the corners of your eyes
while you sleep.


Amazing
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
:hug:
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think you need the hug
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
you're probably right
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your words inspire
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:icondeclanewan123:
declanewan123 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
love is the best
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
you used to hate love
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:icondeclanewan123:
declanewan123 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
that was before i needed it :/
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