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nonsense, in colour by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



swimming in raindrops.
parallel parking between stars.
falling up, waking down.
skydiving into oceans to become seasalt-

blatant impossibilities.

a poem without words,
a breath without air,
a dream without waking-

heartbeat thoughts.

feeling like fire to the chest,
breaking glasses in the shins,
dramatic upswings in the stock market-

you fill me to the brim with hope and nonsense.
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

...and on a wide-screen tv, if you're lucky!

dagnabbitiwishimadesensesometimes.

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:iconchloroformboy:
Sense is overrated.
Don't you think ?

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i make them good girls go bad !
:iconi-like-sushi:
OH LAWRD.

This is amazing.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

This does make sense. In a sort of mishmash nonsensical and imagry-filled way. :)

You're writing makes me smile. Profusely. :heart:

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Hi!...
I am a proud admin. of project-improve!
I write. I am obsessed with music.
I am insane. I :heart: :coffeecup:
I paint. I play instruments.
I play videogames. I listen to metal.
I love Jesus.

Any questions?
:iconcapturedcolors:
Making sense never really makes sense if you think about it for long enough..

I like it

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"The cloning of humans is on most of the lists of things to worry about from Science, along with behaviour control, genetic engineering, transplanted heads, computer poetry and the unrestrained growth of plastic flowers."
:iconfaustscribe:
Wow, this is amazing. I love the imagery, so visceral and vivid, especially the first four lines. It was very enjoyable to read and I feel quite inspired now.
:iconsupertaate:
I don't want you to make sense! you write beautiful nonsense. like this.

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i had an idea for a really clever signature.

...

but i forgot.
:iconilisi:
aaaaand waking down appearsss (:
?:l elvis sez k. he approves.
so does srsfaec >:l


"I WANT TO WAKE DOWN
actually...i have before"
BAWWWWWW

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let's play a game called you pretend i am an actual poet
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
Don't ever make sense. <3

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...with pudding. :eyes:

Avataaaarrrr. :heart::noes:

I have a vivid imagination, or maybe I'm just tired of reality.
:iconeternalfreedom:
if this is what comes out when you don't make sense.
then i dont think you should want to make sense.
:heart:

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“And if waking up alone in a car is about as good as it gets I'll know I did my best, I know I did my best to be yours.”

GG Forum
GGM
:iconhguodyalp:
';parallel parking between stars' <3

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You shine so bright its insane
You put the sun to shame
:iconlearn2love:
this is amazing, you write beautiful nonsense, i love it <3

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this is See You Later, im not into Goodbyes

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