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there are one hundred ways
i have to fill myself
that still keep me empty,
and for all the love for you
i hold in my heart,
i treat you like you're nothing.

you have built structures
and outlines of cities to press
against a dark inked sky,
you are the blood of a broken pen
coursing like a river
through my veins.

i look the other way.

i look for holes
in the sweatshirt you gave me
because there are holes in you,
and i wonder if they match up
with mine.
i leave it tucked just
inside of my closet
so that i don't see it
unless i look for it,
but when i do
i pull it in piles
up to my face
to be sure
it still smells like you-


four months later,
it does.
to not forget a thing
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:iconiceblueeyedgirl:
Iceblueeyedgirl Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, Last line is my fav so perfect!!!!
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do-they-collide Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"i look for holes
in the sweatshirt you gave me
because there are holes in you,
and i wonder if they match up
with mine."


beautiful
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
thank you <3
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:icondo-they-collide:
do-they-collide Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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whyamibothering Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'and for all the love for you
i hold in my heart,
i treat you like you're nothing'

i can't even describe how much i know this line to be true and i have to thank you for finding it when i couldn't define it myself. your words are of the most beautiful and honest variety.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
you are so lovely to me :heart:
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:icondelicatesilver:
Delicatesilver Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Knew I would love it from the first line.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
thank you, my love
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projectilewordvomit Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, good ending.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
thanks!!
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