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Could read forever. by KaiaRose

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Poetry by ijabberjay


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maybe it's weird
or maybe it's beautiful
but i picture every boy
i might end up with
taking photographs with me -

here ,
we are at the beach
by grey waters
in the atlantic february ;
here ,
we are all angles of bone
& skin, just close enough
to make something beautiful ;
here ,
your back sinks like a
broken ship
as you sleep in such peace
that even the shutter keeps
the silence safe
from its sound .
a quick thought

i hope this turns into something
i think the photos would be beautiful
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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
Wow, what a great poem! Well Done!
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MariaTala Featured By Owner May 14, 2012
great imagery.:heart:
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
merci <333
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MadisonHelen Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Writer
I do the same thing. Whenever I'm dating someone, I imagine that scene from Atonement (if you haven't seen it, you should. gurl, you would love it) when they're running the waves and it's silly and theatrical because love is not that at all.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
i haven't seen it! maybe i should
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MadisonHelen Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Writer
It's so good and beautiful and british, but so tragic and depressing.
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collarbonechild Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i do this as well. i've always wanted to have someone who would take photos of those intimate moments with me. however i wonder if it would make them less precious so i never do it.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
i wonder the same, actually
i just want to do it anyway
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alika-n Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is actually pretty good!! Doesn't look at all like a "quick thought" ;-) I love the lines! I love the images! Not sure if you're looking for (constructive) critique but all I would potentially change is the 1st line "maybe it's weird or maybe it's beautiful". Keep up the great work! :-)
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
:] thank you! i don't know if i can change a quick thought, though haha but i'm always up for critique!
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