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tangled language by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



we speak in tongues of liars
with invented words like
tangled messes left behind
by haphazard thieves.

sinking ships are swallowed
whole by an ocean that hungers
for more than everything.
[and more than it could wish for.
ravenous waves of desperate
compulsion crash around the hulls,
hollowly licking the decks and
going
          down.]

syllables shine like blood
s p a t t e r  on the walls,
wrapped in warped worlds of
words and tongue-tied letters.
[no number of syllables could
match the music of hearts beating
l  o n  e l y.]

petrified bones sleep behind the
bruised knuckles that speak
to blackened smiles.
[turn around, close your eyes,
and  fall
                fall
                       fall.]
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

this is for ~Squirrel-23 due to the attempts of invented words.
very loosely based off of said conversation.

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:iconconfessionsofanna:
oh my.


you are for lack of better words an amazing poet, as i've said before. maybe i should invent a word for it :D
:iconrainforest-primate:


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so you can't hold a star in your hand though
at least you can move on to that better plan
:iconskerd22:
Very nice indeed.
:iconteenyxtinyxtina:
i do love the way you wrote 'fall' at the end there. it adds a nice touch to the ending of it.

<3


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:flagcanada:
Poetry Admin for =DailyLitDeviations
Send me suggestions.
:icon109-0415:
I like the spacing effect you used in "l o n e l y."

I'll probably steal that. Sorry.
:iconthe-chemical-factory:
we speak in tongues of liars
with invented words like
tangled messes left behind
by haphazard thieves.


:heart: wowowowow.

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you were the fire in my eyes,
but i wanted to put you out.
:iconpalecandlelight:
i love the styles of this. and the spacing of words. that first stanza is really powerful.
:iconhot-sauce-vixxen:
So beautiful. ;-;

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...if you know what I mean.

TyZulaaaaaaaa. :heart::noes:

My icon was made my the incredibly awesome ~numbah3 ILU. :blowkiss:

Well slap me with a fish and call me grandma!
:iconohsostarryeyed:
thank you! :heart:

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
:heart: thank you so much!

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.

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