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i leave
toenail clippings
bobby pins
&empty watter bottles
on your floor
in case you decide to forget me.

this is just our dynamic
this is just how our relationship works.
i read you chapters of the
silliest,
strangest book i know
&you have me create
voices for each character.
i am most comfortable as the narrator,
plain &unassuming,
but you like my crazier caricatures best.

it reminds me of how you like
the stranger ways my mind works,
&how you will pry sharp things
from my clawed fingers
&show up late for work
just to make sure i eat;

the hateful frustration i feel
when my body yearns for its
self destruction
only to be thwarted by something
it can't control;

it reminds me of how you love
the parts of me i most hate,
&the way we can fight
as we go to bed
but before i fall asleep,
i nestle myself into
the curve of your back
&i am safe.
you left and i was angry
you will come back and i will be sleeping
i will wake when you lie next to me
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The-last-black-rose Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
it reminds me of how you like
the stranger ways my mind works,
&how you will pry sharp things
from my clawed fingers
&show up late for work
just to make sure i eat;


This is how he makes me feel, it was weird to read that x
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
<3
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poisonxmuffin Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so relatable, and so beautifully written. :heart:
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
thank you <3
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kori-fuzy Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This sent chills all over me and completely stole my breath...
I love this. I love love love love this.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
thank you so so much!
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kori-fuzy Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, my pleasure.
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
absolutely beautiful and real
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
thank you, dearie!
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MozartsNemesis Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
"it reminds me of how you love
the parts of me i most hate,"

so powerful and genuine. Nicely written.
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