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there are no anteaters by *ohsostarryeyed:iconohsostarryeyed:



tell me about your headache,
tell me about a trip to germany,
tell me about your fascination with staples and puddles.
tell me your name,
shirt size,
and favourite song,
tell me you mean it when you say-

a heart-shaped face is set between snowbanks.
it is not yours, it is not mine, it is not attached
to anybody or any body.
i do not like the winter,
i do not like the cold,
i do not like when i forget to brush my hair.

you frown at wastepaper and
the way i brush my teeth in hour-long intervals.
you tell me to stop it or i will brush away
the tooth itself, but i asked the dentist and all
it is, is excessive.
i do not like the bins you set out at the curb
at night, and drag in at morning,
and how they often serve as rain barrels
for the birds and coyotes and anteaters,
i dream there are anteaters.
you tell me that dreams are seconds long,
and i remembered your insomnia.

i woke up with a funny taste in my mouth,
metal and blood and nasal drainage,
dreamsleeps and truth-
woke up underwater this morning,
remembering who you are,
but forgetting about me.
:iconohsostarryeyed:

Author's Comments

i cannot get 'radiate' by ellington out of my head.
however, i don't think this was much influenced by it.

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:iconawasteof-paint:
you tell me that dreams are seconds long,
and i remembered your insomnia.


and the last stanza are every kind of amazing.
how do you come up with such amazing stuff like this every day? kfjfsas.

--
we will fold and freeze together far away from here.
:iconvideotaped:
i <3 this.
the repetition in the beginning is really good.
+ the last two lines are my favorites.

--
to avoid criticism,
do nothing,
say nothing,
be nothing.

personally, i'd rather be someone than no one.

wouldn't you?
:iconvelocity07:
I like the last part a whole lot! And the repetition is really good.
:iconbrightest-morning:
I'm loving your writing style. its the words and the creativity . :heart:

"i woke up with a funny taste in my mouth,
metal and blood and nasal drainage,
dreamsleeps and truth-
woke up underwater this morning,
remembering who you are,
but forgetting about me." :)
:iconneyla25:
:heart:

--
I'll visit your bones next century.
:iconp0laroids:
a heart-shaped face is set between snowbanks.
it is not yours, it is not mine, it is not attached
to anybody or any body.
i do not like the winter,
i do not like the cold,
i do not like when i forget to brush my hair.


i don't think i could ever write as wonderfully as you. :heart:

--
Flickr
:iconslaughter-lord:
i love how you write. it is like half-thoughts.

i am not sure which part of this is my favourite, or even if i have a favourite part. this is all amazing.

:heart: wonderfull.
:iconmilleniumchicken:
”remembering who you are,
but forgetting about me. ”
amazing and beautiful :heart:

--
we are the kids who feel like dead ends...


~ProjectImprove
:iconaka-ash:
"you tell me that dreams are seconds long,
and i remembered your insomnia."
Beautiful.
i absolutely adore this.
:heart:

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