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i once held you
as you fell apart
in my arms;
you, like smoke,
beautiful in its toxicity.

i am too afraid
to say your name.
you are water vapor,
fragile and
ever promising
to disappear.

i love your most
fragile son,
i love him so completely and wholly,
the sun can't even shine
unless he is shining first.

here god,
here is your beautiful
creation,
so achingly in love
with the world; he is

doing everything
he can
just to make it
hurt
a
little
bit
less.
he is a cloud of smoke
all poison and glory
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:iconyelshua:
Yelshua Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Who is e?
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
me, a nickname given to me
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:iconyelshua:
Yelshua Featured By Owner May 28, 2011
That's just ironic, cause in the story I'm writing the main character is named E.
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:iconden12:
Den12 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
Is this refering to Jesus "doing everything
he can
just to make it
hurt
a
little
bit
less. " Beautiful poem.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
it's not, but thank you!
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:iconden12:
Den12 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
You're welcome. :)
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medailon Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Really interesting, I never read anythig about God form you before. I think it's beautiful.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
:) thank you, lovely!
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sylverwiings Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
oh dear, this is gorgeous :) so beautiful, i am in love!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
thank you so much!
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