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night,
black and bony
sharp
lonely,
fades in neon lights.
bar top,
slick shine,
cups of
red wine,
three dollar shit
still,
classy
contrived,
still,
top class,
dirt-floored dive.

neon signs
faded lights
faded road
faded buzz
laughter crowed
faded walls
nature crawls
into our skin.

cliffs
ceaseless,
drop
endless,
water
deep and swallowing
bodies,
human
and self.

bodies,
bodies of bodies
elbow and knee
tangled,
joints and sheets,
promises
in the open air-

nothing exists
better
than the moment,
hesitant
anticipatory,
of entrance,
entranced
by the sway,
porch swings
of hips
how pendulums
tick

and we talk,
murmurs,
until taciturnity
takes hold
of each others' tongues
and gasps,
sudden,
cause gaps
in the connection,
unbreakable,
as unity
unties
only to retie
in ceaseless
reunion
again.
05.0.14 edit/addition

weird syntax, i like it, smd
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:icondiddlyhohum:
diddlyhohum Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love this. feels very present. momentary but permanent. you know I'm a stickler for rhyme and rhythm 
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
ahhh thank you <3 i love getting comments from you
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Befera Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student General Artist
omg i love the rhythm of this so much <3
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
thank you <3
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toshowyouiloveyou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
can i please take you up on your marriage offer
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
yes
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:iconseabelle:
seabelle Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
what about me?!??!?!??!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
u + me 4eva gurl!
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:iconseabelle:
seabelle Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
<3
i feel ready for another baby. its been a while.
ready to conceive again?
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
gurl letsdoit
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