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if i tell you, i know
you will become a bird
in my stomach
flying forever miles away,
out through my throat,
singing songs
i
can never have.

i keep saying the words
i love you
in my head
(i just wish i could
love you
in my arms
instead)
i hope you read this and you do not know.
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:iconredmonster22:
redmonster22 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Your work is lovely!
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
thank you! :hug:
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:icongypsyfoxdancer:
gypsyfoxdancer Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Beautiful. :) I know what you mean too.
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:iconbreathinginthestars:
breathinginthestars Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
so.. personal.
and. accurate.
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samsarasurfing1 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
Amazing :)
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:iconfriskyrahul:
friskyrahul Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
sweet! loved it...
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ejectionletter Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
the last parenthetical insertion is golden. <3
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
thank you, lovely!
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:iconwh1t3-n0153:
WH1T3-N0153 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That last stanza gave me one of those moments. Beautifully said. :heart:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
thank you so much :heart:
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:icontecora:
tecora Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
i can relate to this, and it is beautifully written :)
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AliceDanielle Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
lovelylovelylovely. :heart:
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:iconlittle-supernova:
little-supernova Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
What a thought-provoking second stanza. Amazing. :heart:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
thank you!
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:iconfind-m-e:
find-m-e Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
this is a beautiful piece. I can relate to it right now. thank you for sharing! (:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
thank you so much, my love!
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:iconfind-m-e:
find-m-e Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
no problem hun (:
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:iconetre-aime:
etre-aime Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
I've always wanted to be a bird in your belly
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
you can be if you promise to stay
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:iconetre-aime:
etre-aime Featured By Owner May 20, 2011
that's a hard one =/
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
:(
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:iconetre-aime:
etre-aime Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
I know, I'm the worst kind of person.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
no, you're beautiful.
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:iconmazegirl:
mazegirl Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
I definitely relate
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:iconpagan-poetess:
pagan-poetess Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Professional Writer
beautiful :heart:
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:icon13memorystar13:
13Memorystar13 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
This is absolutely beautiful! I love how you made the second stanza rhyme, without making it sound corny <3
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
thank you so much!!
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:icon13memorystar13:
13Memorystar13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
You're quite welcome!
You know, if you extended this, it would make a lovely song.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
if only i could!
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:iconformaniac:
formaniac Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Student Writer
perfect.

perfect.

perfectperfectperfect :heart: ~~
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
:iconnouplz:
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:iconxvinfex:
XVinfeX Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
that whole last stanza...You're so amazing....I love your poems to death.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
you're so sweet!
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:iconxvinfex:
XVinfeX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:blush: its true though
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dragonlily29 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Very beautiful^^
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Violet-amnesia Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
Oh my, the ending was great! I could hear the rhythm.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
thank you!!
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:iconstar42:
star42 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
Aint that the truth?
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xXBlackHeartWolfXx Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful :)
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:iconluv-addict-14:
LUv-AdDicT-14 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
this is sweet.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
thank you!
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:iconluv-addict-14:
LUv-AdDicT-14 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2011
your welcome.
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BurningCrimsonLove Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
Love love love this!
I love the last stanza as I can relate to that right now :)
Beautiful piece again (:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
thank you!!
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:iconburningcrimsonlove:
BurningCrimsonLove Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
You're very welcome :)
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TheArtfulPolitician Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Student Writer
I think that way a lot. Both about your poem and your author's note.
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:iconthefluffemsrule:
thefluffemsrule Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
this is exactly how I'm feeling these days :hmm: I hope your arms are filled one day soon though :)
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Resonantscythe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
This really spoke to me. I feel the same way about someone right now. I wish I could tell them but I can't.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
it's so hard.. you want them to know how you're feeling because it's like a mountain in your chest, but it might scare them away and that wouldn't be worth it...i think.
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:iconresonantscythe:
Resonantscythe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
Yes, exactly! And you keep trying to tell yourself things are fine the way they are, but you always want more, and it can come with guilt from hiding something
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