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i wonder if you would
change your mind
(change yourself,
find it in your
heart
to feel a little something
for me)
if you saw the words
you've pulled from
my mouth;

uncovered by your lips,
i find poems under my hands.

i write strophes and lines
imprinted on your skin
when i move my fingers away.

i have so much to
show you,
i could give you so much
to feel,
but you slink like a
nightcrawler from light
to a comfortable recession,
and there,
you stay.

one day,
we will talk again
and no stammered heart
will beat like birds
if our hands touch;
one day,
you will realise
that sooner than you have,
you could have
shared your self
with someone else
and been safe-


you would have been
safe
with me.
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peridot-magelette Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
i feel like this sometimes...
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tiajones Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so very lovely. <3
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
thank you :]
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Mister-Saturn Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I never comment enough but blugh.
This particular one speaks to me. Love it.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
it's fine! thank you :]
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aeronautics Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
very beautiful, dear
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
oh, thank you very much! <3
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supsupxxdurg Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
ugh:heart:
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
:hug:
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MarianWeaver Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Professional Writer
This is a poem absolutely brimming with regret, beautifully balanced.

This sequence in particular ... such a wonderful way to sum up that awkwardness and tension.

one day,
we will talk again
and no stammered heart
will beat like birds
if our hands touch;


I find myself asking, why the Eastern sun?

:blackrose:
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