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i'm here to tell you
about fire and living
& how both burn even if you ignore them

it's not about what feels good
it's about what doesn't
cornering what hurts
and exposing it
really displaying it
pedestal on high
for what it is
and not what it pretends to be

you are not living
until you hurt
you can't be alive
if all you know is comfort

comfort is only a sign
that you are doing what you know
it is admittance of limitation
because you are human
and only know so much
and it's agonising to think
that you can be comfortable with that
and not want to reach out
and touch every thing you find
and read every book you see
and hear every sound you can

because enough is never enough
is never enough is always
too much.
i don't know i feel frenzied maybe i'll take that neurontin i did just take it like four hours ago but i'm supposed to take it twice a day so whatever now's as good a time as any

"write hard and clear about what hurts." --ernest hemingway, my dearest
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Princessgetho Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love how you're just so poetic! >W< Makes me feel the emotion of the poem just like if I were to listen to music. Because what ever I listen to, influences my mood.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
you're lovely <33
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Princessgetho Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awe. Thank you. Honestly, though. I think your poetry is so admirable and marvelous. I want to start writing some detail, awe-inspiring poetry like you.
You really should never ever stop. I'm totally a fan <3
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kaname-chan Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
As I read this, I was thinking to myself about how much truth there is to this. It makes sense. Well done
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
:heart:!
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kaname-chan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
:)
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Suspithra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
<3
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ConvictionbyLarm Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, you know it's wonderful, when somebodyelse finds words for a thing which seems impossible to discribe. Maybe it's a thin line between accepting things, we can't change and working in progress on other things, we can change. But having the wisdom to seperate both, might be difficult.

I love it
Thanke you <3 :)
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
thank you so much :hug:
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