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i fall in love from
my head to my feet, and i
take no prisoners.
lil haiku idk

been updating my writing tumblr! @writers-sickness
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trembling-knees Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh god, this is perfect. So perfect. You're perfect :heart:
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
i love you <3333
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trembling-knees Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (My kawaii plushie) [V6] 
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NeoKeth Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
What if we volunteer?
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
then i suppose that's a different story!
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NeoKeth Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Writer
Then as tribute...
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
:love:

Sorry for the emote... I'm so shitty with words.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
psh no you aren't! <333
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
:heart:
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beruda Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's rhythmical, and fluid, but aren't your toes already on your feet?
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
oh my fuck haha just fixed it!
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beruda Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Proof read your writing. That one I learned the hard way.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
it felt right, i don't know haha when i get a thought, sometimes i just throw it down
i lack inspiration most of the time now, it's so dumb
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:iconforever-or-yesterday:
i adore this.

btw, thanks to you and your live-changing reminder that love takes no prisoners i know what my next tattoo will be!
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
oh my god, i feel honoured!
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:iconforever-or-yesterday:
well it ended up being a really important thing to have been told. it gave me perspective and continues to do so, and i'm pretty grateful for that.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
you're awesome, for real <3
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forever-or-yesterday Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
thank you! i think you're pretty amazing yourself.
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Writer
Very interesting. Even though haiku is originally about nature, it's always really interesting to see the more modern take on this old poem form. I quite like this piece. 
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
thank you! (also thank you for not getting on my ass about the whole haikuisnature thing, i've had people chew me out for it and like...)
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Writer
Well, to be fair, there are now a subgenre (I forget the name) which is basically "Westernized Haiku" where poems aren't always about nature but also not always 5-7-5 as well!
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
ah yeah, I've heard of that as well :3
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wh0rem0ans Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
yes
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