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xclt Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
I caught a glance of your work and then I though I'd come back later, another time
but then I was hooked as I read one after another.  I did so enjoy myself and at times
 I found myself sitting in your room as I watched you type out what it is you were writing.

I also had some question's and I also read most of the comments that were written and I realized
I don't fit in.  I should have just read, liked and then left.  For one reason, in your Bio ID area you
mention some words you don't like, and not knowing all the family members of each word  I don't
feel safe to comment as I wish I could.  Another reason those that do comment have a way of saying
or communicating as Poets only know how to.

Yet I didn't want to, WamBamThankYouMam my way out either.  (WamBam=:+fav::+fav::+fav::+fav:)
So now I happy and confused at the same time and cracking my skull a couple of times doesn't help
matter's much....

If as I say I am, Broken, then some of your works fit as pieces that my heart is missing,... we good?
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
thank you!! that's so nice to hear. i'm glad you can feel my writing :]
xclt Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
It was my pleasure,  I had wanted to do some reading this night 
but Bear and I had hiked all weekend and today and I pushed to hard.

I  mean I just had my 14 surgery two Thursdays ago and have been
hiking since the next day ........."what a duck!!"..haha I had a good reason

so I am starting to see crossed eyed, so expect to hear from me again...........(((((((((((((((duckie)))))))))))))......:heart:
WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your writing is amazing. it's inspiring, really. :)
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
wow, thank you so much!
WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome. :)
IMouseI Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
Every few weeks, when I check da, I always read your work. Most every word is honest, as usual. Even if it's the fake kind of honest, I still like it. It feels, to me, like you rip the feelings out of your chest, stab them into words then slap them onto paper(or monitor, whatever). Unfortunately the feelings don't always connect to create a palpable form, but when they do (or even come close) it's fantastic. Always write to bleed, make Hemingway proud, and you'll learn to sculpt your words into something that will steal the breath from every living thing with eyes or ears. But this is all just my opinion, and I'm still a newbie so watevs. Keep writing so I can keep enjoying. If you write a book, post an amazon link so I can give you my money. I don't know where to put comments like these, maybe I'm still not accustom to online social etiquette, so if you don't like it here just fucking delete it or hide or something. Sorry if it's creepy to have some random leave a comment on your page, I don't go on da enough to know if it's normal. If you like this comment reply, even if its just with a dot, so I don't feel like a fucking loser by leaving this comment that'll take up half your page.

P.S. Your refusal to capitalize reminds of me of that one girl in Paper Towns, by John Green. Just saiyan.
P.P.S. Your pics are ok too.
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
i read this and i really appreciated it. my writing is entirely honest, and it's good to hear that i don't always hit the mark, but i often do. i know my writing isn't perfect, i don't even like it myself, but i'm glad you do. thank you :]
lovemypunkin7 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student General Artist
i just wanted to let you know that i really enjoyed your broken poetry man poem because its just like how i feel about my ex. so thank you for spelling it out for the world to see.
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
oh, thank you :]
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